Friday, May 10, 2013

timed writing/Chaemin im/tue 11 am

Work less and have more leisure time

 

                                                                                            200902928 Chaemin im(EIT)

 

  Most people today are always trying to do their best at work and even home in order not to be left behind. They are also required to achieve better results at works and study more to keep up with the ever-changing society. However, Why do they work hard and cannot have more leisure time even though there are many timesaving devices in their homes and works? In my opinion, people today should have more leisure time to make better results in their life.

 

  Some people might think that it is impossible for people to have more spare time in this era. They think that people cannot help working harder than before because there are many people in our society who can replace their job. In other words, without any efforts, they may lose their jobs or cannot be promoted at their works. I understand that point. However, if people always try to work hard in order not to be left behind, someday they will be totally exhausted and may lose their own lives. Working hard is an important part of life but without any pauses, it could ruin all the things that they have done so far.

 

  I don't think that working more and harder does not surely guarantee more successful achievement. There is a study that measured the difference between results depending on whether they had a break time or not when they worked. The result was that the first case made a better achievement than the other one. Furthermore, continuing to work without any break can tire their brain and that decreases efficiency of their work. Since having even a short break time can make higher efficiency of their work, it is necessary that people should have more time to rest.

 

  There is another reason why people should have more leisure time. Today, more and more people are getting mentally sick because of their intensive life. They always care of not only the works that they must achieve but also money for their family's living. For that reasons, they have no time to take a rest for a very short time and even don't think about that. However, if they stop working just for a while and have some time with their family members or friends, the possibility of getting a mental illness will decrease. I strongly believe that when people do that, they can get certain energy from the time and that makes a better result in their life.

 

  In conclusion, I think that people should have more leisure time for the quality of their work, mental health, and their life itself. Some people might think that people cannot avoid the fact that they are always required to work harder but it can make a lot of problems. Therefore, it is necessary that people should work less and have more spare time.

 

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