Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Minyoung Kang/timed writing/TUE 11

Despite many timesaving devices in our homes, people today are working harder and longer. Explain whether it would be better for people to work less and have more leisure time.

                  The national happiness rate has been decreasing in the United States. Simultaneously, the number of people devoting their lives to more work and less play has been rising at the same rate. Even though there are many time saving devices that actually facilitate our lives, people use the extra time they get from these devices on meaningless activities. Unbelievable as it seems, the human life is deprived of leisure time ever, and it has been stated that people nowadays have less leisure time than the people in the feudal society. However, I believe that it is crucial for people to keep more leisure time for three reasons.

                  First of all, people need leisure time to be free from the vicious cycle of TV, work, and shopping. These days, the lifestyle of many people just consists of three main activities that keep their lives flow. The first activity is earning money at work. They spend more than ten hours a day in front of a computer without even moving around. They get exhausted from constantly looking at the bright computer screen and thinking with all the knowledge they have. When they return home, they directly sit before the television. They soon are exposed to numerous advertisements that lead them to more shopping. These simple yet vicious steps keep many people occupied with no time to spend on the truly leisure activities. If they try to invest more time on what they wish to do, it would stop this cycle for the better.

                  Secondly, working could put too much stress on the mental and physical health. Most of the times, the workers are not able to rest their brain or body while they work. The fundamental reason why people need to work is to have a quality lifestyle and to be happier. However, now people are putting the cart before the horse as they emphasize the importance of working rather than keeping a high quality of life with adequate exercises and relaxations. If people begin to forget what is more important in their lives, their mental and physical health could be put into serious dangers as they cannot give to the body what it requires.

                  Lastly, they need to invest more time into self development. Many people nowadays are trying to have one pastime activity to make their life more vibrant. It can be playing any instrument, playing sports, or even hand crafting. These activities will not only be a great way to make their free time more meaningful, but it will also act as a connection between many other people. For example, people could join different clubs to share information or even just to socialize. Engaging in pastime activities will give them opportunities to be free from hard work and worries, and it will help people to promote healthier lifestyle.

                  In brief, I believe that the workers nowadays should spend more quality free time that they can save from time saving devices. It seems that too many people are caught by the fascination of televisions and internet, but they are yet to know the importance of keeping more colorful and healthier things that could help them lead a better life. For their health, self development, and well being, they need to realize that working around the clock is not the answer.

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