Same Subject , Different Mood
A photograph is the finest tool which contains the moment. The moment captured by a camera shows everything about the subject. So people assume the story of the photograph through the background, mood, expression in it. Two pictures in our textbook are typical examples we can notice each own story. In addition, an obvious contrast between two photographs draws attention. Let's look at these pictures in more detail. In the photograph named 'Village School', the first thing that catches eyes is its gloomy mood. Even though some cute children are seen in it, it is overall dark in the classroom which they stay in. And children sit motionless with stony faces as if they listen to their teacher carefully. This stillness of children adds dismal atmosphere to this photograph. The composition of this photograph plays a role in making tension as well. By arranging the boys in triangle, tension in the photograph mounts. The photograph 'Children's Puppet Theatre' creates cheerful mood. Girls and boys in this photograph are looking at something curiously. This is so cute that it makes me want to know what children are staring at. Also, their various motions like pointing and shouting bring life to that photograph. Along with their motions, facial expression makes the picture more vivid. Every child has her or his own expression. This reveals their sense of freedom. Even though children are in the center of both photographs alike, some differences are found. First of all, the mood is the contrast between them. While 'Village School' seems to be depressing and melancholy, lively and joyful energy is given off from 'Children's Puppet Theatre'. Besides the atmosphere of these photographs, each photographer seems to focus differently. 'Village School' appears to focus on the light shining through the classroom dimly, not small boys. But people easily realize that a variety of children's actions and expressions are main theme in 'Children's Puppet Theatre'. As seen above, the same subject can provide diverse feelings and impression. Especially, differences shown in 'Village School' and 'Children's Puppet Theatre' are very interesting. Children in the photograph 'Village School' are still, looking so nervous. But 'Children's Puppet Theatre' shows other children who look so cheerful and cute. One seems very dark and restricted while the other looks bright and free. These diversities create unique mood in each photograph.
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Saturday, June 1, 2013
Yang, Myong Hwa / Reaction / Tue 3,4
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1. I like your concluding paragraph. It effectively wraps up the essay by summarizing.
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be that there are obvious contrasts between the two photos you discussed in the essay.
3. I like the part you described and defined photographs as ‘the finest tool which contains the moment“. Though it sounds a little bit poetic, it is very clear what you are trying to say.
4. Everything was clear to me.
5. It would have been nice if you mentioned ‘the two photographs in our text book’ with more detail. For example, stating the title of the photograph and giving information about the photographer would have made your essay easier to follow.
-Yun Jeong Lee 201002551
To Yang Myong Hwa From Jisu Song 201001709 Assignment Reaction Essay
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is that your essay is very well organized.
2. Your main point seems to be your reaction to each of the two photographs and differences between them.
3. These particular words or lines struck me as powerful: your last sentence “As seen above, the same subject can provide diverse feelings and impression.” I think this sentence clearly shows your reaction to the photographs.
4. Some things aren’t clear to me. These lines or parts could be improved (meaning not clear, supporting points missing, order seems mixed up, writing not lively): In your 3rd body paragraph, I think you mentioned too much about the differences. Maybe you can add more about things in common.
5. The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is one word in your last sentence. “These diversities create unique mood in each photograph.” I think the word ‘diversities’ is not appropriate in this context. I think ‘differences’ is better.